Yellow bicycle/Alina

My little brother was a naughty kid. Usually whenever we have chores we get money, but he wouldn’t because he would do bad things like put my mothers white blouse with her red blouse. But one day he was desperate for a new bike, but he only had a quarter so he begged and begged. My parents said he already had a bike, but he wanted the new red bike with the yellow stripes. They said no but he greedily grabbed my little sisters money and left. I warned him that I would tell mom. But he got in trouble.

2 thoughts on “Yellow bicycle/Alina

  1. Hi Alina,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    I thought you did a SUPER job of including all 5 words in your story.
    There’s a little bit of me feeling sorry for your brother…but as the saying goes ” If you do the crime, you pay the time.”
    I suppose he deserved to be in trouble!
    Good work this week.

    Keep writing.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)

  2. Good work Alina! I enjoyed the story and your writing is very smooth and flows nicely. Your little brother does seem to be very mischievous! Great job, well done!
    Anna (Team 100WC)

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