Why do I have sisters? – Gavin

When I came back to my house after leaving for the summer, I was excited and happy. But when I went inside, and saw what my sisters had done with my stuff, I blew my top. They had taken a bunch of things from my room, and damaged them. They also took a bunch of my game disks and got fingerprints all over them. Someone even left them out in the sun! After I saw this, I was so cross that I yelled at them repeatedly. Later, they cleaned my room to say they were sorry, and I forgave them.

3 thoughts on “Why do I have sisters? – Gavin

  1. Hi Gavin, this story was very nice and it was relatable too. But I think you should work on your grammar. But keep up the good work!


  2. This story is very straight forward and very well written and it is very punctual, keep up the good work 🙂

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