War!/Leona

Argh! Once there was 50 people on a boat, they were having a war with another boat. Every boat had 4 men loading canons. Then, the boats shot canon balls at each other. BOOOOM! One of the boats started sinking! The other boat started screaming of joy! The boat that was sinking hit an iceberg, then started screaming and crying. Someone fell off of the boat that was sinking and died. The other people on that boat decided to jump off because they were going to die sooner or later. The people on the other boat threw a party that was wild.

2 thoughts on “War!/Leona

  1. Hi Leona,
    I really liked your writing, well done. I loved how interesting it was. You used lots on onamonapia and that really sucked me into the moment. Well done!!!
    From,
    Bailee

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