The worst day ever By JADE

I rushed out of bed so quickly i slipped. Anyway i wore a red scarf because it was red day for my job. I brushed my teeth and ate a banana. I went to the car and guest what my gas ran out.  “ Can this day get any worse and it did. While I was calling the taxi a car ran over mud and it got on my scarf. By the time the taxi it was 1:30 my boss was going to kill me. So, I went out for lunch. I had Pizza Hut it was so good. The end.

3 thoughts on “The worst day ever By JADE

  1. Jade,
    Some days ARE like the one for the unfortunate narrator of your piece. I think it does not matter where you live in the world, there are some things that are common. A day like the one you described could get a little brighter with some pizza. Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

  2. Jade,
    Loved how you used red as a descriptive detail. I would agree that would be a bad day. Remember when you are writing to re-read your work to check for spelling an punction. Hopefully this was not inspired by a real life experience!
    Great job,
    Mrs. Komerska
    5JR in Illinois

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