The traffic light by senee

Hi I’m Paul and once me, mom, and my brother were in my dads car. There was this drunk driver that couldn’t see the red light and he passed the red light while ours was a green light. My brother told my mom to stop but mommy didn’t listen and the car crashed everything stoped and after one week the drunk driver was fine but my brother wasn’t… he was in a coma and after 5 months he finally woke up but the doctor told us that he had only 4 months to live. I was devastated then after 4 months he died…

2 thoughts on “The traffic light by senee

  1. Hello! What an incredibly sad story. Your writing conveys a very important message though about drink driving. Telling the story as Paul was very good as it makes the story much more intense. Well done.

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