The Ride At The Park 😛 By: Kala

One day last year during the summer,It was a really nice day out.So I went on a ride on my scooter my scooter was red with fluffy green handles.So on my ride i saw a lot of things.Most of the things i saw were animals and plants. My mom was with me of course because she didn’t want me to get kidnapped.But as my mom and I were walking on the concrete path, we see a puppy. Of course I petted  the puppy i mean who wouldn’t.The puppy just danced around us like a ballerina.Then we went to the playground.

One thought on “The Ride At The Park 😛 By: Kala

  1. Hi Kala
    This is a great description of a lovely day out and you described all that you saw so well. I love how you used the words of the prompt as you brought them to life for example your description of your scooter which was “red with fluffy handles” made me smile and your description of the puppy dancing around like a ballerina created a powerful image. I got a bit worried when I read the word “kidnapped” but thankfully all was okay. Well done. Keep up the good work.
    Máire O’Keeffe (team 100wc)
    Galway, Ireland.

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