The moment your of television- Omar

Have you ever been on television? Do you want to be on television. Well we are inviting a family that think they  not on camera but they really are.They will be playing smart words it is a game we’re you have to guess the word for money. Wow look it seems that we’re on television. How did you know said the game owner I saw the one hidden camera in that crack of the word. Dang it the owner said well you should still play what word especially is the word but it only give e l eleven no Wrong

2 thoughts on “The moment your of television- Omar

  1. HI Omar
    I like how you made it sound like movie.
    It doesn’t make sece the way you say well you should still play what word especially is the word but it only give e l eleven no Wrong.
    Issy m.

  2. Hi Omar,
    I really liked how you started your story with asking questions, I think it would make anybody want to read more, Just be careful at the end of you story there was on bit the didn’t make sense.

    From Olivia

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