The legend of the candy bar part 2 – Nathaniel

I told my parents that I was going to a friend’s house, but actually I was going to the candy bar. I took my bike and pumped my leg’s as fast as I could. My blood was pumping, my legs felt like jelly. I was going so fast that I didnt see the car coming straight for me. It happened faster than I could say, “Oh no!” I was hit and flew down the street. My skin was getting peeled off, and then I heard a young girl say, “I got you.” And she started laughing hysterically. Part 3 coming soon.

One thought on “The legend of the candy bar part 2 – Nathaniel

  1. Great story, that crash sounds painful!

    Did you miss the prompt by any chance? “I was so cross”?
    No worries, still a great story!
    Keep up the good work!

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