In 1853, a white castle stood on a hill. The people who lived inside were a king, queen, and prince named Mike. Mike was very crafty when it came to outside. Every day he would make a new creation for his family as a gift, and one day, Mike made the impossible: The Leaf Umbrella. While Mike was rolling around a tree, he noticed leaves falling down from it. He had the idea to make a leaf umbrella out of the leaves. He got to work, and the creation was done. Mike walked home, proud, with his new leaf umbrella.
Hi Jayla I really liked your story it was very entertaining you used the perfect keep up the good work.
Matthew Ms Brennock.
I like how he make something out of nothing
Hi Jayla,
I liked your story.
Mike seems to be very creative to make a umbrella made out of leaves!!
Keep up the good work.
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Eden
Hi,
I really like your story and your use of adjectives
See you soon,
Ben
Hi Jayla I loved your story from Alfie.