The haunted mansion- Nico

After I moved away from my old house in Houston, I moved into a mansion in California. It was very dark when I got there. It had an orange staircase and a tan railing. It looked like an ordinary mansion, but I got really scared because I saw that there was a sign that said candy shop. My mom said that it was there because it used to be the original owners shop. I saw a cookies and cream Hershey bar through the glass. I ate one, even though my mom said not to, and that night, I was sick.

One thought on “The haunted mansion- Nico

  1. Hi Nico,
    Well done on your story this week. I like how you you have used the prompt. You should always listen to your mom!!
    Keep up the great writing.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c

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