The Gold Diggers-Tre

One afternoon Jake was at his job digging in a mine. He was really good at his job, the boss said the that he had the strength,potential,and the flexibility. One day it was all normal and then a new guy came. His name was Jeff. Once Jeff got in the picture everything changed. Jeff was like beating him in everything the boss had said to him. But once that happened Jake had to do something. So he stayed at the mine for 24hs,but all that hard work paid off, HE FOUND DIMOANDS. But Jake said “were should i hide it all.

2 thoughts on “The Gold Diggers-Tre”

  1. Dear Tre,
    Thank you for taking part in this week’s 100 Word Challenge writing prompt. I like how you used the prompt to show a power struggle between two different characters. It kept me on the edge of my seat while I was reading it and trying to figure out what was going to happen. I also like that you ended with a cliff hanger so your readers have to come to their own conclusions about what choice Jake would make. Keep up the great work!
    Mrs. Schmidt (Team 100WC)
    Grade 3 Teacher
    Pennsylvania, USA

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