The Ghosts (Part 3)- Cate

I looked around the room. I suddenly saw a key on a desk! I grabbed it and went out a back door. Outside, I saw a crazy sight. There were a bunch of boats on the ground! I went into one of the boats. I saw a book on a seat of the boat. I picked it up and read it. It was the story of these boats! It said that mysterious ghosts moved them to this lawn. Maybe those were the ghosts that lead me to this dreadful place! I’m going to find a way to escape this place!

2 thoughts on “The Ghosts (Part 3)- Cate”

  1. Hi, Cate.

    I really love the way you were able to continue your story. This worked out perfectly!

    This piece reads like a real mystery. Maybe the ghosts DID lead you to this place.

    In your writing, try adding more adjectives to “color” your work. Use words to describe what you see, hear, feel, and smell. This will help the reader truly understand how you felt.

    How will you escape?

    Hemingway

  2. Thanks for the comment! I’ll try to add some “color” to my piece. I hope you like my following pieces! I have no idea how I will escape. I’ll continue this series soon!

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