The City That Wasn’t Open Today. By, Niko

It was Friday evening, and everything was almost closed for 5 hours. John and Juan are sleeping and powering up for the next day. It is now Saturday, a shopping day for them, but something was off. Although it is Saturday, nothing was open. There are no cars and no people. John took a deep breath and yelled HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. No one answered, but he heard someone walking. He then realized that it was a surprise party. They were ready to surprise John, because it was his birthday. They came our and yelled SSSSSSSURRRRRRRRRRRRRRPPPPPPPPPRRRRRRISe! John is flabbergasted. He said,” Thank You everyone.”

3 thoughts on “The City That Wasn’t Open Today. By, Niko

  1. Hi, Niko

    I really liked your story.

    It reminded me of when there was a storm and everything closed down

    From, Mia

  2. Hey Niko,
    I really enjoyed reading your story this week,
    I think your vocabulary is very good.
    From Oliwia.

  3. Hi Niko
    I enjoyed reading your story
    I like how you used advanced vocabulary to describe how the people feel
    Keep writing this is very good
    -William

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