Surprise Party-Lana

 My dad made arrangements to have a Surprise Party for my mom. It was a holiday so my grandparents were already coming on Saturday. My dad made them come Friday, because that is the day of the party. My dad picked me up from dance. He told me my grandparents were not there because of weather. They didn’t make it in time. They felt really disappointed when it just wouldn’t take off.The caterers did a nice job, because the food was delicious. It was an awesome and fantastic party. My grandma and grandpa came the next day. It was awesome.

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  1. Hi Lana,
    Great story! What is based on a true story? It sounds like a really fun party. Maybe next time try using connectives to joi =n up some of the shorter sentences. Keep up the good work.
    Michael (Team 100wc), Coventry, UK

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