Running Away- Jayden

My friend Corey, was telling me a story about a man. His name was Jeffrey. Jeffrey was a ghost who haunts peoples’ houses who were mean and bullied Jeffrey. All Jeffrey wanted was to bullie them back but, his mom held him back. We just noticed it was 9:37 P.M. so we tried to go to bed but, the Jeffrey story kept haunted us. We looked around the room for ghosts but saw none. We heard someone walking up the stairs and cringed back into our sleeping bags. We noticed it was just mom. We promised never to tell stories again.

3 thoughts on “Running Away- Jayden

  1. I like how you built up the suspense and it turned out to be your mom. I also like how you made it easy so I can picture the story in my head.

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