The Road Trip – Brogan

One day my family went on a road trip to Florida. We had been driving for almost three hours when my dad said, “lets take this detour up here.” When we turned all we saw was a drop. Then a bunch of cars were driving on the other road, so we couldn’t turn around. We were all scared, but we agreed to go down the hill. At first it was fine, but then as they got faster it was a lot scarier. WE were moving very fast when suddenly I woke up. It was just a dream the whole time.

2 thoughts on “The Road Trip – Brogan

  1. Good job, Brogan! I liked how you had a plot twist and the whole thing was just a dream. Keep up the good work.

  2. I like how you made the story a dream for the whole time. I also think the part going down the hill in a very fast speed is good.

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