Oliver 100 wc

One day, a little boy named Ben was walking along a river. When he was very close to the water he could see a fire in the distance. Since it was so far away he thought nothing of it. He got a drink of water and then went home. When he got home, the fire spread. In a mere fifteen minutes a fourth of the village was consumed. The heat was unbearable, so Ben ran far away. Many presumed he was dead, but he was only laying in wait in the forest. When the fire died down, he returned home.

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  1. Greetings from Australia Oliver. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge. I enjoyed reading your text. I can see the effort you have put into using sentences of different lengths. It makes your writing interesting to read. I always appreciate accurate punctuation. Thank you. I suggest that you experiment with starting a text using a verb eg Walking along the river, Ben noticed …… It can hook your readers in. 😊🌻

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