Jasmine 100wc we seemed to be on the television Copy

One day I was watching tv, and then all I saw was the reflection of me and my family. “ We seem to be on the television!” said my mom. “That’s amazing!” exclaimed my little sister. “I know!” We all got so excited that we didn’t realize the power outage, or that no one was filming us in order to be shown on tv. Then I realized that the power was out, but I didn’t want to spoil their joy. I left it alone, but the effect was SO much worse. We were disappointed, but we still had fun that day.

2 thoughts on “Jasmine 100wc we seemed to be on the television Copy

  1. Hi Jasmine,
    I love your story and how you had a problem in your story like when the power went out. Next time you write double check your punctuation, keep up the good work.

    From Olivia

  2. Hi Jasmine.
    Awesome story.
    I really liked how you made it that your reflection was in the TV.
    Next time try to include other people like your parents.

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