I was driving with my son and daughter, when I slammed on the brakes and everything went faster. As if it kept getting faster and faster. Then it came to me, I was having a heart attack. We kept going and I went off the road. I kept going and I slammed into the tree. My son had a tree branch in his leg and a piece of glass in my daughter’s cheek. I was terrified, lost, and dazed. I ran to my son and daughter then called 911. They came and helped them out. After that I collapsed and died.
Oh, No! I would love to see a part 2. Maybe you could write from a ghost’s perspective. I liked the plot twist at the end. I feel bad for your children! Keep up the good work.