Flying Squirrel!!! Jayla 100WC

When I was 7 years old, my parents wanted to get me a pet. They went to the pet store, but saw no pets available. I was at home, waiting for my pet, when my parents came. They had a very sad look on their faces. “What’s wrong?”, I asked. My dad replied with, “We couldn’t find you a pet.” I then shouted out the word, “BROWNIE!!” and suddenly, a small brown squirrel flew inside the house. It then flew back outside in a flash. “What was that?”, Mom said. “A squirrel“. I said. “But where did it go?”, she shouted….

2 thoughts on “Flying Squirrel!!! Jayla 100WC

  1. Hi Jayla
    I enjoyed reading your 100 word challenge and I really liked how you used the words of the prompt to leave your story on a major cliffhanger. I’m now wondering where did the squirrel go as well as wondering how long you knew Brownie! I also think your use of speech in the telling of the story is very good. Well done on a creative 100 word challenge.
    Máire O”Keeffe (team 100wc)
    Galway, Ireland.

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