The Creepy Encounter! By: Lina!

One August morning, I was riding my bike around the block with my friend. We were moving very fast, when we heard a strange noise. It was coming from the woods. Neither me nor my friend wanted to go and check out what it was. We were both so afraid. We decided that we would both go together. When we went into the woods, we saw the weirdest creature! It was big, scary, and it’s teeth were awfully huge and sharp. Me and my friend ran back to my house, and never spoke of our encounter to anyone ever again.

3 thoughts on “The Creepy Encounter! By: Lina!

  1. I can feel how scared you must have been terrified, I maybe you could use some brackets, dashes or commas for extra information

  2. I would be very scared in that situation! This was a very good story. The description was very well written. Keep up the good work.

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