Bees by Carmen

There are 3 kids that got lost in the forest. Abby, Katy, and Lana. They found a cage and walked into it. There were 3 golden bees in it but it wasn’t any ordinary bees they were made out of metal. They also talked and said if you touch me I will turn you into a bee. So than Abby touched it and the bees said next one. Now Katy and Lana touched it and they all turned into gold metal bees and are in a wooden cage. They are thinking we are gonna die here aren’t we. The very scary end. 

One thought on “Bees by Carmen

  1. Hi Carmen,
    Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this prompt. Despite the fact that I very much admire bees and all they do for our planet, I certainly wouldn’t want to be immortalised as one.
    I know we use the word ‘gonna’ in our everyday speech, I feel that when we write, it should be ‘going to.’ What do you think?
    Have a safe and happy Christmas holiday,
    Jackie (Team 100WC)
    New Zealand

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