Ava 100 word challenge- hide and go seek gone wrong

One day, Me, my friend Mallorie, and my cousin Haley were playing hide and go seek. I was counting, and Mallorie and Haley were hiding. I found Mallorie, but I couldn’t find Haley. I asked Mallorie to help me, but we still couldn’t find her. We looked everywhere in the house, ”but how could she have just disappeared?” Mallorie asked. We kept looking, but as we heard a sneeze, Haley was right behind us the whole entire time. We all were laughing on the ground. It was the most best hide and go seek game I had ever played in my life.

5 thoughts on “Ava 100 word challenge- hide and go seek gone wrong

  1. Great story Ava. I liked it because you had it as a twist, I thought that Haley had gone missing. I like the way that in the end she was behind them. Keep up the great work.

  2. Hi Ava,
    I really like your story it is very interesting. I like the way you said Haley was behind and when you found out, you were laughing on the ground. I hope you write much more wonderful stories. Keep up the good work.

  3. Really really good strong
    I like how you included where she was
    Keep this good work up
    Well done 🙂 !

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