Angelo 100 wc

One day I was walking down the street and a random person walked up to me and shoved me . I was very cross because he shoved me pretty hard . So I approached him and said “ Hey what’s your problem” he said” what do you mean” I was like “ dude, you shoved me”  “ Oh yeah sorry bout that”. Finally I got an apology from that dude. Jeesh people these days are so rude. So I continued on with my day until I tripped on a can of coke and the same person said oh sorry that’s mine. Wow what a good person.

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  1. Dear Angelo,

    I’m sorry that this happened to you but I’m glad you got an apology.

    Great use of dialogue to tell the reader what was said. To improve, you could try sharing *how* something was said? For example:
    “Hey, what’s your problem?” I snapped.
    “What do you mean?” He retorted.

    Well done!

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