100wc/senee

I love to play baseball. For my games I always win but yesterday I lost… I didn’t know what happened but I was tripped. I went to bed sobbing cause I actually lost for once. I took off my baseball glove and went instantly to sleep. I woke up the next morning I saw my baseball glove on my hand I didn’t remember putting it on. I was very spooked and i hid under the blanket hoping my mom would come upstairs and check for me in my bed.I heard a voice it said i needed help from anyone.

HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2 thoughts on “100wc/senee

  1. Hi Senee,
    This was a very spooky read; you made great use of the writer’s voice and left me wanting to know more. Well done.

    Mrs MooreTeam 100London

  2. Ooh Senee, I think you’re still asleep and just dreaming that you heard someone crying for help …. or perhaps there definitely is something super-natural happening here. Go well in your softball career.
    Jackie (Team 100WC)
    New Zealand

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