100 word challenge Oliver

Far in the distance from my village there is a giant window. It is massive and has pink frills on its sides. Next to it there is a second window. I dream of looking through the window, but I would never be able to make the hike up the mountain. I guess I could try. OK I’m going to do it. This hike is actually fun! It’s really enjoyable. I’ve finally got up the mountain. I’m going to look through the window. In the window I see everything dark. It is really cool to see everything in the pitch dark.

2 thoughts on “100 word challenge Oliver

  1. Hi Oliver,

    It was great to imagine the glasses from the perspective of the little person and the giant window, as most of the stories I read didn’t do that. You gave enough description for me to understand how you story linked to the picture too. Well done!

    Michelle, Team 100wc,
    Melbourne, Australia

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