100 Word Challenge Mark

It was a dark and stormy night and 3 teenagers were watching The Bee Movie. They were on the part where Barry said, “Ya like Jazz”. They were laughing so bad they gaged. Then suddenly, darkness enveloped the room. They couldn’t find the flashlight nor they couldn’t see each other. Then they saw a flash of light it was there there mom. They had a flashlight in her car just in case of anything happened with the lights. They got back to the movie and got some popcorn. Their mom joined them and watched The Bee Movie. They had a blast.

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  1. Hello Mark,

    Your opening made use of a classic story beginning, “It was a dark and stormy night.” It quickly sets the scene and gives readers a possible reason why the lights went out. Luckily, the mom had a flashlight and the three teens were able to get back to “The Bee Movie”.

    Keep writing and sharing.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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