100 word challenge- Khloey

    My best friend just came back from Houston Texas.I went to her house and when I got there she was wearing sunglasses but they were unusual.They were black with a reddish pink lense and pink fur around it.She said “Let’s go to my room I got another surprise!”.So we both headed to her room and I saw it it was a little sunglass holder it she put her sunglasses on it and it was really funny because there was a man cleaning the sunglasses on the sunglasses holder.She said she bought some for me too! I said “best surprise Ever!”

2 thoughts on “100 word challenge- Khloey

  1. Hi Khloey,
    I like your story this week. I like how you describe the sunglasses. Well done.
    St Molaga’s SNS,

  2. Khloey,

    What a great story! I really enjoyed reading about the ‘best surprise ever!’. Your story was well sequenced and descriptive, as well as enjoyable to read. Thank you.

    Michelle, Team 100wc,
    Melbourne, Australia

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