100 Word Challenge Jayla

1,000 years ago, there were pirates. And they weren’t friendly. The leader’s name was Captain Goldbeard, and he meant business. He forced 4 men to go down in the bottom of the ship and load the backup cannon. They did as he said and loaded the cannon. The other ship was firing at Captain Goldbeard’s. The cannon at the bottom of the ship was so strong, diamond couldn’t even withstand this cannon’s cannonballs. 2 of the men carried the cannonball, and the other 2 got the cannon set up. Once the cannonball was in, the men counted down and fired. The ship was GONE.

3 thoughts on “100 Word Challenge Jayla

  1. Jayla,
    Your details helped me to clearly envision just how strong the cannon was–even diamonds couldn’t withstand’. I also like your use of the phrase, ‘he meant business’.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

  2. Hi Mrs. Gagnon! Thank you for reading my post and commenting on it! I really appreciate it. I will keep writing my posts!

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