Hi I am Zack when we were on the plane we had to wait a very long time for it to take off. When it just wouldn’t take off me and my mom go off the plane the as soon as we got back on the plane it took off we weren’t in our seats and so we fell down. Then we ran to our seats in first class. We had games to play if we got bored on the plane which I did but my mom didn’t and we got to our destination without anything bad happening and that’s the end.
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Hello Senee, I loved your story. It’s always annoying when the plane’s take off is delayed.
Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Senee. You confused me by introducing yourself as Zack 🤔 …
Then I got it! Very clever! 😂 I suggest that you re-read and edit your text before you publish (or ask a friend to help you). Remember accurate punctuation helps your reader to engage with your writing. 😊