100 w/c kirk

One day I was walking to the top floor. When I got there there was four people all holding a  canon. I was thinking it was around World War One. I think they were there because they were shooting at the enemy. Also it took a lot of people to control and move a canon. Because it was really hard. It also took more than one man to shoot. So they had to work together. And there were a lot of men fighting in the war. I went past the rope and there was a canon ball inside. The end.

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  1. Hi Kirk,

    Well done on entering the challenge this week. I can see that you really used your imagination to paint a picture in my mind and explain what was going on. Don’t forget to include action too.
    Keep on writing.
    Mrs MooreTeam 100London

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